Lit ISU: jPod Essay

2006-06-19 05:44 PM | 1 comment

It took me a few hours, but here it is, ready to be ripped apart. Once again, any feedback is appreciated.

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Jake Billo on 2006-06-30 10:47 AM (#)
Your first sentence was passive tense and nonsensical:

"The technology industry is ever changing, and so are the people that run, and are involved in it. "

I'll read it later.

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